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Damn It Pinkie Pie by Frosthawk89 Damn It Pinkie Pie by Frosthawk89
There are a few things dA does to RUIN this. Just pretend this was already expanded full-size upon clicking and that the preview image wasn't a really condensed version of this.

Anyway...

Done for MLT-WTG Week 8, wherein one pony teaches another a skill.
[Random] Pinkie Pie, you're so random!
(that's my description)


All that out of the way... I don't really have an excuse for this.



MLP is Hasbro, FiM is Lauren Faust!
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:icontitaniumdragon:
TitaniumDragon Featured By Owner May 12, 2013
I just found this, it is very amusing.
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dragonfire238 Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2012
ok it took me a little while but i think i was able to decipher what the the last sentence was

"whats going on here? Oh my jesus are you serious? I'M IN THE MIDDLE OF NARRATING A STORY HERE AND IT WAS PURE GOLD. WHAT ARE YOU DOING PINKIE PIE? DAMN IT NOW I HAVE TO START OVER."


LMFAO any way I noticed that your last sentence didnt have any punctuation so I added it in where it made sense.

XD
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:iconpatroison:
PatRoison Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
This was awesome. I love how Pinkie tried to teach how to break the fourth wall.
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:iconredphienix:
redphienix Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
I lul'd.

Good stuff xD
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:iconthe-land-shark:
The-Land-Shark Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Bricks.
I shat them when I read through it all and saw Pinkie at the bottom.
:iconseriousfaceplz:
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:iconmr-kitteh:
Mr-Kitteh Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2011
I find it concerning how the word 'succumb' is clearer than the other words.
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:iconduplexfields:
DuplexFields Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
This is beautiful.
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:icondrake-rex:
drake-rex Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Pinkie: And that's how you break the fourth wall XD
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:icondreadpirateme:
DreadPirateMe Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
Pinkie Pie walks among us...
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:iconyoshachu:
Yoshachu Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
That's cute.
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:iconsheimii:
Sheimii Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2011
This is really well done! The ponies are in character and the end made my laugh so much.
Thanks for cheering up my day!
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:iconfrosthawk89:
Frosthawk89 Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2011
Thank you! I mostly just wanted to see Pinkie crash through a story, but it's good that you liked the actual story behind it too, haha.
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:iconsheimii:
Sheimii Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2011
You're most welcome! I sure did.
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:iconcloudrunnerteeny:
CloudRunnerTeeny Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2011  Student Writer
is this a story art? cos its funny non the less
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:iconfrosthawk89:
Frosthawk89 Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2011
I actually have no idea what it is to be honest, but thanks for liking it anyway! = D
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:iconcloudrunnerteeny:
CloudRunnerTeeny Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2011  Student Writer
lol, no probs
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:icondoctormo:
doctormo Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
It worked for me, I have art show big by default. It's in the settings.
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:iconfrosthawk89:
Frosthawk89 Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2011
That's good to know - thanks! I'm still pretty new to dA. :X
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:iconarcrane:
arcrane Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2011
Genius... that is all
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:iconsodomitor:
sodomitor Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Awesome, I love Pinkie Pie randomness))
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:icondiscoleprekawn:
DiscoLeprekawn Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2011
Oh, god, you genius.
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:iconkomochi:
Komochi Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2011
Lol, awesome C:
Under Pinkie's right hoof, I can read "and kill your family". LOL, WHAT ?
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:iconfrosthawk89:
Frosthawk89 Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2011
I admit to nothing! >_>
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:iconfundz64:
Fundz64 Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i loled at the words that pinkie screwed up at the end
(hey wait a minute what's going on here Oh my jesus are you serious aaaaaaaa.) and on right side (I am in the middle of narrating a story here and it was pure gold. What are you doing Pinkie Pie. Damn it now i have to start over)
... am i missing a few words in the sentence? :D
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:iconfrosthawk89:
Frosthawk89 Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2011
Nope you pretty much nailed it! The rest of the words were pretty much random words, those were the only two actual sentences. Good eye!
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:iconfundz64:
Fundz64 Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:iconderpy-hooves::iconsaysplz:why th4nk y0u... derpity-derp
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:iconfrosthawk89:
Frosthawk89 Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2011
Man derpy makes literally anything great.
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:iconfundz64:
Fundz64 Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:iconwordplz:
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:iconebonmane:
EbonMane Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2011
You know what would have made this super goddamn pro? ASCII Pinkie Pie art.
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:iconfrosthawk89:
Frosthawk89 Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2011
...I didn't even think about that. That would have been fairly easy to do as well. God damn it.
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:iconebonmane:
EbonMane Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2011
I'm sorry I don't like this. Pinkie Pie 4th wall breaking doesn't do it for me.

It's not you, it's me.
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:iconfrosthawk89:
Frosthawk89 Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2011
It's amazing how often I get told that in all facets of life. : P


To be fair though I was also planning a more serious submission, but I'm not sure if I'm going to actually do it.
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Spyro0w0 Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2011
Hahahah that was hilarious! Great work especially at the end.
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:iconfrosthawk89:
Frosthawk89 Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2011
Thanks man! It was pretty fun to do. Muchos gracias for the fave!
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Spyro0w0 Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2011
Your welcome! ;D
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Ragnarokia Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Pinkie Pie at her finest.
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:iconfrosthawk89:
Frosthawk89 Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2011
I'm glad you think so! Thanks for the fave!
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:icons008:
S008 Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2011
I'd say you portay the characters of others (in this case, the original ponies) rather precisely.
There's always so much silliness going on in the MLT-WTG submissions!
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:iconfrosthawk89:
Frosthawk89 Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2011
Thanks! I'm glad you said that cause I find myself actually having a hard time writing for Pinkie - I feel like I either put too much or too little silliness into her dialog.

And yeah, there really is! I guess it's due to the whole 'unofficial' nature of the beast.
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S008 Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2011
I think it was fine. As for Twilight, I don't really want to judge her changes in temper, for I honestly don't know how she'd act in this situation.

It also seems to me as if writing funny and special stories (ones not tagged as NORMAL) is easier than writing something serious save for sad stories, which can have a powerful effect on some readers, even if they aren't written as well as they could have been.

Of course, both have their difficulties, I admit that. I've rarely, if ever, written stories; now I'm trying myself out at this week's theme.
Long story short, now I'm stuck with tens of little scenes in my head. All of them, whenever I've typed them down, turned out unrefined and in no way form a touching story, let alone a complete one - I suppose it's the same way with comedy: if the reader can't appreciate it, it becomes awkward.
I think I've wandered off here and built the Great Wall of Text, sorry about that.
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Frosthawk89 Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2011
Kind of a late reply, but I definitely relate to most of what you just said. I have lots of a little ideas floating around in my head, but I really want to try to write a more 'epic', complex story - but nothing ever seems to consolidate itself enough to form something comprehensive. That's sort of why I'm doing WTG - I'm hoping I'll get to hone the whole notion of coming up with ideas as a sort of skill, so I can finally have enough creative juices going to create the thing I really want to create.

Well, good luck, man! I can only suggest having fun with it - the journey can be just as rewarding as the destination.
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S008 Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2011
Thanks, although I'm actually afraid to submit my work (it's not finished, anyway). I am but a small potato, you see, and the skill level others have achieved in the art of writing keeps disquieting me.
I see the point of uploading my work for criticism, but even I can tell my work isn't worthy of being uploaded. It's only loosely based on the theme; it's typical; and the word-stock I use is deplorable.
This, above, was the whining part, dedicated to Rarity. Otherwise, I'll try my best to write it and upload it. :)
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